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February 23, 2007
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:iconinsaneashrak1:
Here it is judges, try to download it if possible, if not...go to the shots in my gallery, they're all there.

X_X took me forever, it's late. try and read my messy handwriting. I need sleep. Ask questions and i'll answer em 2morrow.

Be Grateful!

HEAVY CRITIQUE PLEASE!

(c) me
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:iconfrodobursh:
Cute outfits :D I love the dresses
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:iconayanaanime:
luv it rakkie, nice job :D
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:iconinsaneashrak1:
thanks lexi ^^
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:iconkallastyos:
Official critique:

The collection looks strong.

I'd say, check up on all of your color choices. You do have a lot of color in this collection, which is good, nonetheless its coming from various spots in the spectrum. That's not a bad thing either, just designers must be careful that their colors complement each other well. For example, I'm dubious about the colors of the trenchlike jacket on the top left flat.

The silhouettes are interesting, make sure proportions are strong. For example, the third look from the left in the lineart.

Great stuff!
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:iconinsaneashrak1:
yea, when i do my final im gonna colour on the layers all at once on the model, which i didnt do here so it'll make more sense and if something doesn't go ill fix it ^^

didjoo send the link to the other judges jess?

and thanks alot ^^
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:iconkallastyos:
tell chris u have it in.
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:iconinsaneashrak1:
i did. T_T he hasnt comments le gar!
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